monsoon haiku - II

pine leaves
lose patience
rain plops

plopping sounds
build a chorus
the path bends

path bends
near a bungalow
a milestone

the milestone
where sun had died
years ago

years ago
a young July
brought me here

here I stand
a rope bridge sways
above a stream

the stream
doggedly cleans
bloodied rocks

2 comments:

  1. Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐July 26, 2010 at 7:01 AM

    Arun,

    The succession of images are riveting.

    Chen-ou

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  2. ArunansuJuly 26, 2010 at 7:23 AM

    Thanks Chen-ou. That's an area i've been wanting to delve into for a long time. Smiles.

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